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I loved how you wrote this piece always in great detail Excellent job. Always got a clear image with your writing. Second of all I loved how you could feel the emotion radiating off the character. I almost felt sorry for him. It was very clear on how the apocalypse affected him, he showed how shocked he was to see Earth like that and sad to see where its come to. But the bright side is that I saw and felt his determination and excitement to find a new better civilization. This poem was perfect in my opinion. It gave suspence on to see if there was going to be another race of people, and you also wonder what happened to cause this. This poem is one of my personal favorites
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OfOneSoul Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is such a kind critique! I truly appreciate you taking the time to write it. Everything you said lifted my heart, and I hope to do just as well in the future. :iconrubcheeksplz:
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